First outreach is not a funnel. It is a short message to a real person who might have the problem.
Hey [name] — quick one.
I'm building [product], aimed at helping [audience] with [problem].
Have you run into this before, or am I overestimating the pain?Hey [name], saw you're working on [specific thing].
I'm researching how [audience] handle [problem].
When you last dealt with this, what did you use?I've got a rough version working now.
Would you be open to a 15 minute look? Not a sales call — I'm trying to learn where the pitch is clear vs confusing.The wording people use is raw material for your landing page.